my writing

I sometimes read my writing and it would read so bad, so childish, like a conversation set for children. When I have it in front of me, it doesn't read that bad. But when it's online it takes a different meaning and it's like, "What child are you writing about?" "Who are these children having this conversation?" 

This is the dialogue, that is the most important thing to me when I write the dialogue, the descriptive analysis is not as essential as the dialogue is to me, it should be engaging, entertaining, a step by step type of thing.

This afternoon, my boss wanted to know what my dream is: Sometimes you run so far from it that you tend to forget, okay so what is my dream? Oh, it is first and foremost to write, to be a writer of screenplays. That one hit wonder movie that will get all the awards and attract all the buzz, and just poof! I am outta circulation. That's my dream, I am not going for an all time record, just that one touchdown. That's it, that's all.

Anything extra is just it, extra.